Crouching Tuna

Well, rewrote the whole prologue. Hope this one catches your attention. edit: Now I noticed this should go to Fantasy. Oh well..

Alright, I added a flashback to the first waterfall part, to at least give a reason why he's there. Lots of small changes here and there too, added and cut ...

Thanks for the reviews again! @KJ I think the description part is the thing I'm having problems with. I added some descriptions to the first part, but I don't think ...

Thank you for the review! I'm a bit moved :oops: The whole character changing thing is confusing, I know. I guess I should've asked in the tips section first, because ...